For you so true
This is for my friends who’ve walked along
With me through diverse straits.
Through cramped ends they’d join in song,
All burden to alleviate.
When crazy spells did overcome
This being so jolly late.
When one couldn’t tell what was to come
They’d never desert their mate.
Days passed in fear, nowhere so near.
The cleft now looming wide.
Sight of a tear, they’d be right here
And join with me in stride.
Thus blithely spent, the days around
The woods, a treasure profound.
Time shall give vent to sentiment found
From the goods beyond measure or count.
With me through diverse straits.
Through cramped ends they’d join in song,
All burden to alleviate.
When crazy spells did overcome
This being so jolly late.
When one couldn’t tell what was to come
They’d never desert their mate.
Days passed in fear, nowhere so near.
The cleft now looming wide.
Sight of a tear, they’d be right here
And join with me in stride.
Thus blithely spent, the days around
The woods, a treasure profound.
Time shall give vent to sentiment found
From the goods beyond measure or count.
It reminded me of our walk home on 27/7
Posted by
Dev |
6:12 AM
i am surprised! when i read it from the 27/7 perspective, it seems to relate to that so well.
Posted by
Oscar |
6:19 AM
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Posted by
Oscar |
6:19 AM
Now I realise the true meaning of the last verse of the poem.
"The woods, a treasure profound" the woods obviously reffer to the mangroves around the city's seacoast
"Time shall give vent to sentiment found" we shall realsie how much we neeeded them.....
"From the goods beyond measure or count." coz what the mangroves do for mumbai cannot be counted
;-)
Ok, don't kill me
Posted by
Dev |
8:36 AM
i suppose, for the first three verses i was subconsciously thinking about the walk. However, if your right for the fourth, i have mangroves growing in my subconscious mental state.
Posted by
Oscar |
11:05 PM
ok lemme just say awesome!!how do you write sumthin so good....vn i read it what immediately came to my mind is u n ur frnds frm coll n how ur gonna miss them .........im gonna miss all u guys 2......we had so much of fun!!!!!!this is makin me think of all ma frnds n how i miss them (snifle).
Posted by
RENEGADE... |
9:56 PM
osci isnt it possible 2 comment on da rest of r poetries?? mebbe theres sumthin wrong wid ma browser i donno , but i ant seem 2 see da comments tab.....
Posted by
RENEGADE... |
10:07 PM
thanks a lot gurl! well yes, we've had a nice time which surely shall be missed. I shall miss all my friends and all the love from your side. I'm sure there shouldn't be a problem with commenting on other posts... i am looking forward to what u think.Thanks!
Posted by
Oscar |
10:53 PM
please ppl download firefox, it supports a lot more stuff and besides u wont able to view this blog properly with IE. Ask Diferently challenged technical details.
Posted by
Oscar |
9:33 AM
hey oscii, this is so beautiful.
considering i spent most part of yesterday nite, at the farewell, thinking how badly i m gonna miss u all, and now this s brought me to tears...
Posted by
Geetha |
10:54 PM
you have been exceptional especially in the last year. One of the few women in the class, my lab partner... (we ended up doing a decent job) and a truly loving person. we shall all sure miss u too. Those tears shall soon turn into a great life ahead for u!!!
Posted by
Oscar |
7:54 AM